This term our literacy focus is persuasive writing. One of our awesome quad blogging classes did this last term so I would like you to check out the student pages on the Room 6 Papakaio blog, read their efforts and leave comments.
Here are a few links to get you started:
Animals should not be kept in captivity.
Feel free to look at others on their site. Remember when you leave comments to introduce yourself and say where you are from. A comment should engage with the writer and be positive as well as give constructive feedback.